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A Room of Her Own
Wed, May 28 2008
Sexy Mama
Mood:  mischievious
Now Playing: The World According to Garp by John Irving - audiobook
Topic: poetry

It took me a few days to unwind and time away from the internet definitely helped. This prompt is from Totally Optional Prompts, about "absent friends." Well, this is about a most beloved friend and a certain kind of absence. I guess something else is stirred up when I'm not at work...


Missing Him

cavernous
immense and rumbling
with each tremble
my skin contracts
down to my toes
 
wanting
like summer
wants
the ocean

like a tongue
waits
for taste

senses heightened
so a hand
over shoulder blade
sends boulders into the river

already full
of flood water


Posted by mary at 6:58 PM EDT
Updated: Thu, Jun 5 2008 4:09 PM EDT

Fri, May 30 2008 - 3:03 AM EDT

Name: "Crafty Green Poet"
Home Page: http://craftygreenpoet.blogspot.com

I love the last two stanzas of this,

Fri, May 30 2008 - 3:31 PM EDT

Name: "Richard"
Home Page: http://web.mac.com/rwellsrwells/iWeb/Site/Resident%20Dj

Like a tongue waits for taste - is a great line.

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