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A Room of Her Own
Sat, Apr 12 2008
Another April Poem
Mood:  quizzical
Now Playing: Bruce Springsteen & E-Street Band - Live 1975-1985
Topic: poetry

The Mapmaker

 

He measures distance underfoot,

feeling each rise and fall, slope and retreat.

He first knew that August day,

only eleven years old,

counting the steps in his head,

attempting to escape a life

of his father’s punishment.

He knew after a thousand steps

he’d have to return.

That she could not follow.

 

Years later, she lay boiling with fever,

deaf to the first bellows of the coming war.

His footsteps then were inevitable.

They carried him off,

away from the battle at home.

 

He kept the measurements in his mind

like page numbers of his Mother’s hymnal.

“To the river 308,

Hilltop to the valley 441.”

Long after he had scribbled his notes

on oily parchment,

he could hear her voice singing

faithfully.

 

One day he’d follow his footprints home,

to help rebuild the broken geography.

 

***

I had the word mapmaker in my mind for a few days and got inspired to include a bit of Civil War history. Today, April 12th, is actually when hostilities began in South Carolina. I worry that this poem may be more suited to prose. Please let me know what you think.


Posted by mary at 10:38 PM EDT
Updated: Sat, Apr 12 2008 10:43 PM EDT

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