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A Room of Her Own
Sat, Apr 5 2008
Poem Catch Up
Mood:  happy
Now Playing: The Lady and the Unicorn - audiobook
Topic: poetry

After an April Rain

 

water filled gullies

mining long finished

 

my heart laid open

discarded the same way

 

the men walked miles

to find themselves in the desert

 

along the Platte river

flowing north then east

 

the coarse line of the Mosquito Range

like the pattern of their wanderings

 

in search of earth’s promise

their histories washed away

 

***

I had to do some research for this one. Inspiration was sparked by readwritepoem's random word generator. The word was discard. I did a free write for a few minutes and then my thoughts came together. I wanted to write about the rain and use the word "gully." Of course, I looked it up just to make sure it was a real word! That lead me down a whole path about mining and Colorado. I was reminded of the movie There Will Be Blood and the cold, rugged nature of the work and landscape. I hope all of that came through, or at least the piece makes some sense.  Well, I have some catching up to do for NaPoWriMo... but this is a good start!


Posted by mary at 9:49 PM EDT
Updated: Thu, Jun 5 2008 4:13 PM EDT

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