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A Room of Her Own
Thu, Mar 13 2008
100 Words
Topic: poetry

This is a poem I wrote for a 100 word swap. I thought it would be an interesting challenge, not only to write something but also to be precise with word choice.

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Two Years Since

an impromptu gathering
one rust orange and one flaming red
branch to branch
an afternoon pursuit
and song

the 23rd came and went too
with only the vibration of wood
as evidence

what does grief leave behind
as marker or proof

the well of nothingness
grows deeper
bird call
sounds more sorrowful
hue of blood in dirt
blooms more vivid

life seems as hasty now
as ever
forgettable as last year’s nest
wasted as broken eggshells

these anniversaries
whether remembered or not
are on the path
from here to there

as we migrate
between love and death
life and flight


Posted by mary at 9:13 PM EDT

Fri, Mar 14 2008 - 3:58 AM EDT

Name: "Crafty Green poet"
Home Page: http://craftygreenpoet.blogspot.com

This is lovely and poignant. I like the subtlety in the way you've written it, the fact that there is a story untold behind the details of the poem

Fri, Mar 14 2008 - 11:30 AM EDT

Name: "Christine"
Home Page: http://mariacristina.wordpress.com/

Mary,

Welcome to readwritepoem! I enjoyed how you wove together the sadness over a lost love and images of birds, trees, and seasons. Lovely. 

Fri, Mar 14 2008 - 1:14 PM EDT

Name: "gautami tripathy"
Home Page: http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com

So much depth in your poem. Contains so much in 100 words!

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